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Damaged Goods

Excuse me please can I return this heart, The one you sold me was torn apart, I have a receipt folded so neat, Have you one in stock that doesn't beat, Sorry love I've changed my mind, Keep that heart it was never mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/5/2015 5:25:00 PM
i can relate to this karl excellent pen
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Karl Mcdonnell
Date: 2/6/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Liam,appreciate that comment a lot.
Date: 2/4/2015 11:03:00 AM
She never really cared. Good poem -JT
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Karl Mcdonnell
Date: 2/4/2015 4:11:00 PM
Yeah,I got the wrong one that day JT, cheers pal.

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