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sweet compassion surrounds my heart of uncertainty patiently flavoring my vision of life sorting fiction from truth trusting everyday Angels leading me forward across parched deserts of discovery believing believing

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Date: 3/23/2009 9:41:00 AM
wow had to put this one in my fav--well written well penned
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Date: 3/20/2009 11:57:00 PM
sorting fiction from truth,a hard work to do in this life,very true what you wrote so well here-charmaine
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:54:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful write James, especially the line 'trusting everyday Angels'...
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Date: 3/20/2009 8:41:00 AM
Indeed, you are a man of great compassion, someone I would like to have as a friend. Your poetry speaks to me in a gentle, loving voice, James. LOVE this work!
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Date: 3/20/2009 5:19:00 AM
Thank you James for the comments.
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Date: 3/20/2009 4:36:00 AM
parched deserts, does that ever say so much, great writing James
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Date: 3/19/2009 12:26:00 PM
Beautiful, comforting write. Don't think I would be here if it weren't for those every day angels. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/19/2009 8:18:00 AM
Dear Jim, YOU have to LOVE those Angels that lead YOU to believing I so LOVE the style YOU write in THIS POEM is a Majestically Awesome Write Spiritual Write...HG
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Date: 3/18/2009 8:22:00 AM
This poem ranks you with all post modernity, Sir. You have a path to blaze, blaze on!
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Date: 3/17/2009 3:44:00 PM
there it is over the next dune. let us sing, sing the next tune. it's true it's true it's true. john
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Date: 3/17/2009 7:56:00 AM
Undying faith is portrayed here. This is wonderful, so full of hope and inspiring others to believe that all things are possible in faith. Great writing! Have a great day. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/17/2009 7:19:00 AM
Hopeful, trusting and uplifting....this has a feel of sacred beauty about it....just lovely! Good expression and nice beginning of the day. ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/17/2009 7:06:00 AM
Jim, thanks for your comments on my poems, I truly appreciate...I write alot of my life experiences and memories.. it is my way... now your poem here is absolutely beautiful in its flow, and depth of the words.. I just loved it..... Constance
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Date: 3/17/2009 7:00:00 AM
Parched deserts are wonderful to read.. love those angels that keeps us safe.. good write.
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:54:00 AM
I love the way this just flowed wonderfully:_
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:48:00 AM
wonderful thought, Jim! loved how it all flowed so gently! ~ Arany
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