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Daddy Told Me

Daddy told me not to drink I should have listened to him it happened so fast I couldn't blink everything went so dim when I awoke during the night I felt so cold and lonely on the ground I saw some bright headlights they say i was found by some old guy they say it was a woeful plight and that I would die I guess daddy was right daddy told me not to drink if I listened I wouldn't have to fight so listen or you will be on the life and death link

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Date: 8/14/2009 6:47:00 PM
Kool poem Cheyenne, a warm welcome to the Soup, and i love your name>>James
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