Get Your Premium Membership

Daddy

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Related image

"Father does not see the mournful sad tears, that fall on a mossy stone; O, my broken heart bleeds." And I recall running into your open arms a little girl innocent, You were the first man I loved, and will always be special; The older I get, the smarter you seem to have been back then, My anchor, my rock, my protector, my security, my Dad. Can I ever forget our walks hand-in-hand, in parks and woods, You taught me to love nature and to see with eyes open; Hours we would sit on a park bench watching life drifting by, And I would ask you all kinds of silly little girl questions. Even in death you are my guiding light, my safe harbour, You left me suddenly I never got to say, I love you Dad; Tearfully, I asked you to forgive me as I held your cold hand, If I hurt you sorry, I forgive you also for harsh words. I remember bringing you hot cups of tea out to your workshop, Sitting beside you at your dusty, cobwebby workbench; Admiring your many rows and rows of tin cans and old bottles, You were always asking Mom for some kind of container. Mom said, you kept every nail, screw or bolt you ever met, And I would add, and every board too, and we would laugh; It was me who cleaned out the workshop, O, the stabbing pain, I lingered there for days touching things you touched. Dear LORD, please take care of my Daddy till I get to heaven, Dad, I brought you a dew-kissed yellow rose from my garden; Of all the flowers Mother grew, you loved the yellow roses best, Laying it gently down on your tomb, I walk away with pride. It was on that same workbench that I picked up your pencil, On the day of your death, I wrote a poem about my Daddy; And that day I left the child that was me behind and became of poet, An hour after your death in that workshop I found my Muse. ____________________________________ December 31, 2015 Poetry/Kimo/Verse/Daddy Copyright Protected, ID 15-740-246-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Tell Us About Your Dad, sponsor, Judy Konos First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/13/2016 12:57:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 7:50:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the luv !
Date: 1/10/2016 10:36:00 AM
So glad to see this one on the winners list. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 1:07:00 PM
Richard, thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 1/6/2016 11:59:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 3:57:00 PM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations and the love ~
Date: 1/6/2016 4:26:00 AM
What a beautiful picture.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 9:36:00 AM
Howard, thanks for the beautiful !
Date: 1/5/2016 7:23:00 PM
Beautifully and lovingly written. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:47:00 AM
Joyce, thank you for the comment and the congratulations, so appreciated !
Date: 1/5/2016 3:21:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest your dad seems very special and I am so glad you had him and he was there for you. That is special and not something that has happened to all of us......
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:48:00 AM
Judy, thank you for your contest and allowing me to tell just a bit of what my father meant to me, and I am sure the other entrants feel the same...
Date: 1/3/2016 3:52:00 PM
Sounds like your dad was wonderful. He loved you very much. This, I believe, is the best tribute to a dad I have ever seen. You have nothing to be sorry about at all. Some of us had abusive and terrible fathers. How sad that is for the world, but reading this tribute brings a smile to my face. How lucky you were in this regard. The way you describe the hours spent together gives us much to think about and creates a sense of hope.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:39:00 AM
Duke, thanks for that great comment, yes my dad was a wonderful man, and I was a lucky girl to have such a father as I know many do not, forever in my heart ~
Date: 1/2/2016 1:46:00 PM
And dad's hidden genes transformed the meaning of poetry! Good luck!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 1:56:00 PM
Balveen thanks for visiting my poem and the comment appreciate
Date: 12/31/2015 5:49:00 PM
I can imagine you were very emotional writing this as I felt quite choked reading your tribute to your dad. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2015 10:22:00 PM
Jan thanks so much for the visit, yes, it was very difficult to write, I was surprised how many poems about my Dad I actually have, you was quite wonderful and will be forever with me every single day ~
Date: 12/31/2015 5:14:00 PM
what a great child he has...touching
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2015 10:23:00 PM
Sage, thank you so much for visiting and for that sweet comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/31/2015 11:19:00 AM
Memories are important, you ar fortunate to have had such a wonderful relationship. Do drop by and visit when time permits.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2015 3:35:00 PM
Richard, thanks for the beautiful comment, oh for sure I will drop by soon, promise ~
Date: 12/31/2015 9:15:00 AM
can feel the love! superb. all the best in the contest
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2015 3:36:00 PM
Susan, oh I love the word superb and love, thank you for visiting ~
Date: 12/31/2015 8:55:00 AM
This is supremely beautiful! I expect it will do very well. I could feel your connection with him and the little girl you used to be.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/31/2015 9:02:00 AM
Richard, thank you for those lovely words, writing about my Dad today has brought me tears, he was a wonderful man, and our connection endures even in eternal death ~

Book: Shattered Sighs