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Daddy

Daddy do you remember all the times we had together? When you took me fishin and you got everything together like we were going on a mission I would sit in your truck while you blared the song "Bad to the Bone" without you ive never felt so alone Daddy do you remember all the times we had together? When you taught me how to ride my first bike you wouldn't let me give up without a fight Everytime I would fall you wouldn't let me give up at all You would say to me "don't give up that's not how I taught you you get back on even if you are all blue" "And if you shall fall again pick the bike back up and give it a spin" "You don't ever give up and quit no matter the fall you get back on and give it your all" Daddy do you remember all the times we had together?

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Date: 2/18/2012 9:03:00 PM
what a wonderful gift your dad instilled in you, thanks for sharing
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Tiffany Rowe
Date: 2/19/2012 1:19:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 2/9/2012 7:41:00 PM
If this was your first poem, then it was a good one. Your couplets contain decent descriptiveness and appropriate rhyming. I will take a look at some of your other entries eventually.
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Tiffany Rowe
Date: 2/10/2012 10:12:00 AM
Thanks this poem is about my dad he passed away in a four wheeler accident back in July of 2011 thanks for your comment :)
Date: 8/4/2011 9:00:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tiffany. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 9:22:00 PM
Nice dedication moving and touchy, Tiffany
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Date: 8/3/2011 1:45:00 PM
this is so touching!, well done!.
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