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Daddy

Father, Father look around and look at the mess that you've made You know that your the only one that pushed me far away. So cut me with your words, strike me once again. beat and slice until i bleed enjoy your filthy sin. You treat yourself as king, though cowardess you are. And through discgusting lies you spew Show who you realy are. So cry alone you coward, In your empty life. I try and try to gash you back but hope dullens my knife. Im sorry i never told you, but its you i do not hate. the things you do the things youve said have injured my heart great.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/21/2010 7:38:00 PM
Well written Chelsea.. and yeah Idk about the whole profanity thing hahah. And yes let's squeeze flowers together. Is your poetry soup mail working yet?? have you turned that on??
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Date: 11/29/2010 3:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chelsea. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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