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Below is the poem entitled DAD which was written by poet CRYSTAL MAAHI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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You are my life, you are my way
You are the one, who knows my flaws
My shadow follows you everywhere and you are my living guardian,
And well wisher, who thinks about my future.
You are the one who encourages me, even if I hurt you much deeper.
I try my best to make you happy, but sometimes do things by which you get angry.
But still you build hope in me to become better,
Because you are my always wonderful father…
Follow your steps is what I do , as there is no one as special as you.


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  1. Date: 11/15/2013 9:12:00 PM
    what a beautiful tribute to your father's birthday is today, he is gone almost 2 years now :( I am glad you still have yours to look up to :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:10:00 AM
    Mahima, my newest poetry soup friend.. wow, i was excited when I read your comment. I'm glad you took my advice... :-).. Now here I am following up on all your poems... Dad's always more than meets the eye. I like your charming poem. But, doing mistakes and making dad mad are all part of life.. LOL, My dad, is the only one I can count on.. He's got my back... You did well on this free verse poem... straight from the heart.. always~ LINDA