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Cyber-Space

Where is this place called Cyber-Space?? She will compose, a bit of prose While editing, she thumbs her nose! Her failed attempt must be disposed! So off it goes! To where?? ....Who knows??? She admits defeat... Then hits delete! Those jumbled words, like shameful birds, will disappear to be erased ...so far from here in such disgrace! to Cyber-Space ! > > > > > Where is that place???

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Date: 4/18/2015 6:59:00 PM
wonderful win, Carrie... LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 9:04:00 AM
Interesting thoughts! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:19:00 PM
Good one, Carrie. WHO THE HECK KNOWS!!! Congrats. (maybe in that cloud they speak of)
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Date: 4/16/2015 7:02:00 PM
Great poem, Carrie! Yes, where is that place?? I liked your take on this theme. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/16/2015 3:00:00 PM
May congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2011 4:06:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Carrie : )
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Natalie's "Talkin' Tech" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:44:00 AM
hey Carrie, great write, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/24/2011 8:30:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on another wonderful win with this unique poetry on technology luv.. enjoy more success so well deserved ...
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Date: 7/24/2011 5:51:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of natalie,Carrie
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Date: 7/24/2011 5:48:00 PM
Really cute Carrie! Congrats. on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:26:00 PM
Have you found Cyber Space yet, Carrie? My dinosaur bones need a bit of education. Enjoyed this poem thoroughly; can really relate to it! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2009 6:55:00 PM
a great fun poem with excellent rhythm, I really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 4/1/2009 3:52:00 AM
wow. i enjoyed this one. great shape and rhymes. cyber space is such a great force now in our society. great power but sometimes it can be scary. ~ love, B.
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Date: 4/1/2009 12:45:00 AM
Very witty words Carrie.Nice one.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my Yellowstone series
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Date: 3/31/2009 10:03:00 PM
Dear Carrie, Oh How I LOVE Rhyme especially when the Author catches YOU in the beginning and CARRIEs YOU to the end I am in Awe ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:07:00 PM
>>>>>Cyberspace is right here in front of me and in front of you. You get the good with the bad. And thankfully, there is a delete button. I know I've used it many times....But never for a fun poem like this one with nice rhyme and rythm.>>>>>keep writing.
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Date: 3/31/2009 4:56:00 PM
cyber space gets deeper and deeper all the time. (don't hit delete) submit it! :)
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:29:00 AM
Ha ha! So true, so true. Not happy about Sean's comment. Hope it doesn't happen. What will we do without our cyber-space??? Seriously, it is such an addiction! Awesome write! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/31/2009 11:12:00 AM
Clever shape , form and rhyme from a clever writer .... On a more serious note , I've seen on the News that there is the probability of a nasty cyber-virus , doing the rounds , world-wide . Seemingly , it has been programmed to do most damage , tomorrow , April 1st , of all days . Soupers , should be warned to have virus protection updated ....
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:46:00 AM
....I sincerely enjoyed this light hearted side of Your wonderful sense of humor and creativity within this write dear Carrie!!!:):) ~Smile~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves, John!!!:):) "Have A Very Beautiful Day~Bye!":)
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:32:00 AM
Well, personally, I think Laurie was wrong? It isn't the first left; its the second right! And, it isn't in The Twilight Zone; but, The Outer Limits! Smile~"Good Morning Precious & Beautiful Carrie Richards & All Your Loves!":) But Laurie was right about one thing: "You"~There is way too much "Bright Inside of You," to ever even consider walking away!:)....cont....
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:30:00 AM
love it! great fun, Carrie! good write! Jim
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:44:00 AM
Excellent Rhyme Carrie! The imagery in this is wonderful! I can see letters and bits of words floating through space! This brought a smile to me this mornng! You could never be defeated, just detoured a little on the road to your beautiful poems! Very creative! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/31/2009 7:43:00 AM
Maybe the soup needs a program like Vista to ask us if we are sure and want to continue, just a thought. Maybe it would give some a second chance, Blessings , Ron
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