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Cyber Space

Like an elevator Or a crowded room Strangers together headed toward an outer Or Inner place But I can't see a single face Of those traveling with me The sound of the rapidly typing keys Lost to me All I have before me are the results The alerts and comments and friend replies I can hide here Be free In plain view And best of all So can you Nervous giggles and superficial chats on the weather Are needless masks For real matters I am gay I am straight I am loved by God Voices raise and form communities The human kind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2009 7:24:00 PM
This is an interesting study on our social culture today. I like the perception of this piece, Autmn. Donna G.
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Date: 1/31/2009 1:22:00 PM
Terrific poem my friend..you dug deep with our mindset and our way of seeing things. Great job.
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Date: 1/31/2009 11:42:00 AM
speechless poetry that hits home on human relations, enjoyed reading and it has to go in the fav's. enjoy your day.
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