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CUT THROAT A DAY LIKE ANY OTHER--AT HOME WITH MY BABY GIRL AND HER THREE YEAR OLD BROTHER My son attended play-school three mornings a week his sister still at home had just turned one she loved her big brother—her hero and friend strapped in her car seat-- a restriction she hated we did the short trip to fetch him from ‘school’ The 5 minute drive home –full of his morning news pictures created and people he had played with pulled into our drive- way in no time at all lunch time preparation as they watched cartoons on TV Placing my purse in the room on my bed I turned and was grabbed around the neck sharp knife he held the steel tip close--cut throat threatening to kill me if I struggled or shouted Locking the bedroom door he commanded I hand over anything valuable—demanding to know—where I kept a gun? he pulled off my wedding band and helped himself liberally still holding the knife at my throat – precious sentimental things he stole Comprehending the fact I was no longer in sight my baby’s stood at the door-- banged and cried pleading with my assailant to do them no harm he tied me up, cut the phone cord-- just laughed Allowing my children into the room locking us up from the outside within my daughter was screaming, my son acting brave trying to cut my constraints with a nail file With no phone connection trapped in my room he boldly climbed out the window taking action three blocks down the road— only three years old running to my sister’s home—screaming ‘call the police’ The trauma ended as we were finally set free continued relentless, far beyond that day— constantly this man who attacked causing extensive terror-- fear was never located, escaping his crime-- forever free A DAY LIKE ANY OTHER—AT HOME WITH MY BABY GIRL AND HER THREE YEAR OLD BROTHER This happened to us in July 1991—since then crime has escalated out of control in South Africa… many not fortunate enough to tell the tale

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/22/2014 9:48:00 AM
Wow Kim....what a courageous son ....does he still remember this horrific ordeal.. I am so happy that you survived and wish you all the luck in the world on the job front....hugs Tim
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:19:00 AM
"tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:54:00 AM
compelling story... congrats on your win!...:) huggs
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 6/25/2013 12:17:00 PM
My win?? I'm not sure where you see that. I know I entered the competition, but really didn't expect a win :)
Date: 6/25/2013 11:18:00 AM
a gripping story Kim......your son is truly a hero....congrats on your win
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:13:00 AM
Terrific! You have not to change that word brother, it is correct because it refers to your daughter. The poem is anyway well written and effective
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Date: 6/7/2013 8:40:00 AM
I am grieved for you but am glad you lived to tell the tale. Line one you may wish to exchange the word brother for son. At first I was confused and had to reread that line to understand what you were saying.
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Date: 6/6/2013 12:20:00 AM
- Good morning my dear friend, Kim. - - Is this really ..... yes, I believe you ... but sounds like a horror movie.- Have a beautiful day - oxox / / AnneLise :)
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Date: 6/5/2013 6:01:00 AM
Oh my gosh...I was hoping this was a fiction story while reading it, but I can see now it isn't. Even though it must have been so horrible...thank God you and your children lived to tell about it. I will never understand crime....
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Date: 6/3/2013 10:04:00 AM
My goodness. I'm just stunned. :( Though, not entirely surprised by this as I know SA to be a pretty crime heavy country. How sad. Have you thought about moving, perhaps? Huge respect to you for this piece.
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Poet Tacito
Date: 6/4/2013 7:25:00 AM
No kidding. Check your Soup Mail. Lets talk.
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 6/4/2013 12:35:00 AM
Hi Drake-- thanks for reading this. Yes, we have considered moving, and in fact have "Green Cards"-- permanent residency in the USA since 2010. We have made 6 trips over in the last few years, and my husband cannot secure employment. He is in General Management-- Finance/IT in the retail industry. If you have any contacts could you inbox me.. thanks.

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