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Cupids Error

Inline with the memories but out of phase with reality Maybe it's because you say you're inlove with me but it's not what you're showing me Lies from his lip a touch on the hip, A kiss and a dip you trip, Now I'm no longer your first pick See it was all unfair Cos with every stare I tried to share my emotional scar On a darkened soul like tar, as i stand far Like I was once your star dented by Cosmic Collisions Causing Chaos It seems I don't know who you are Magical Mystery..... How a shot from a Bow to an Arrow through the Heart could cause Tragedy Like it's trick or treat Cupid dressed for Halloween... It's MIND GAMES...See I don't really MIND GAMES as long as they dont cause pain So was it a MIND GAME juggling our hearts BLINDLY Or am I just a victim of CUPIDS ERROR again?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/24/2012 1:24:00 PM
SO ENJOYED READING YOUR MOST CREATIVE WRITE TONIGHT AND THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENT ON MY FEAR POEM .. ALSO WELCOME TO PS .. MAY U CONTINUE TO SHARE WORDS WITH LUV .. 'MORESO' MEANS EVEN MORE .. WHEN TIMES GET ROUGH SHOW MORE LOVE ..LUV ..
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Date: 6/5/2012 12:02:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets Moeka. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Moeka Molise
Date: 6/6/2012 3:51:00 AM
THANKN CAROL, PROMISE NOT TO DISAPPOINT
Date: 6/4/2012 8:36:00 PM
Great poem to start with! Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy reading other poets work, grow as a poet and shine on this website <3
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Moeka Molise
Date: 6/6/2012 3:52:00 AM
THANK YOU, AND I'M ALSO INLOVE WITH YOUR POETRY....YOU'RE AWESOME
Date: 6/4/2012 12:56:00 PM
"is it a mind game or cupids error" as long as you dream about it,it is suppose to be magic and mystery,love it it is so gooood,Ivy
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Moeka Molise
Date: 6/6/2012 3:50:00 AM
I REALLY AGREE TO THAT...BUT ITS GOOD ONLY WHEN DONE WITHOUT DOUBT
Date: 6/4/2012 9:21:00 AM
Well written, Moeka, write on, Jag
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