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Cupid's Arrow

"Don't engage yet to romantic love my dear," My Father said with a tear "Yes, Father" I replied in despair 'Twas afternoon that I found myself in the office room Wondering of the decision with a loom He said he loves me and I love him back But how could I betray my father's pact? Jean Piaget says "No" but Freud and Goleman says "Yes" With thoughts like a story of a complicated plot I finally decided with a shot Forgetting about the promise that I made I let the feelings sigh with relief So let the boat of emotions row Because I was shot with the Cupid's arrow

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2016 10:42:00 PM

Noz Yam, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Nozeuq Yam Ave
Date: 6/12/2016 11:47:00 PM

Thanks Linda. I would gladly desire your offer.

Moon Flower

Date: 6/9/2016 3:36:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Nozeuq. :)

Nozeuq Yam Ave
Date: 6/12/2016 11:45:00 PM

Thanks Moon.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2016 12:23:00 PM

- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Nozeuq :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nozeuq Yam Ave
Date: 6/12/2016 11:45:00 PM

Thanks Sunshine. Hoping to learn from you!

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2016 12:06:00 AM

Oh wow, what a poem, Nozeug, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Nozeuq Yam Ave
Date: 6/12/2016 11:46:00 PM

Hi Skat, thank you. Your constructive criticism would really help me grow as a poet. Please help me.