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Cupid Don'T Let It Miss

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Cupid, drawback your bow, please Don’t let it miss, don’t let it tease Release the string, let the arrow wheeze Squeeze through the trees Carrying it off in the gentle breeze Pierce my lover’s heart when I’m on my knees
Cupid drew back his bow while I proposed She saw the ring in my hand and froze Weeping shrieks of passion came up close Caressing my face saying I do when I arose
1/6/2016

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Date: 1/17/2017 12:10:00 AM
Profound! Definitely 7 & a fav.
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Date: 1/9/2017 11:19:00 AM
This should do well. I also like This version of the song by Sam Cooke.
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Date: 1/8/2017 5:50:00 PM
such a sweet picture of a proposal, Eve. Good luck in the contest. I think judges are going wild with Valentine theme now.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/8/2017 5:59:00 PM
didn't make it :( , but thank you
Date: 1/7/2017 7:30:00 AM
Ah how marvelous a story dear, Eve! Very well done my friend!
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/8/2017 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios, Hugs Eve
Date: 1/6/2017 10:41:00 PM
Cupid, latin for desire! A lovely poem, Eve /|\
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/6/2017 10:53:00 PM
Hello there:-) thank you /l\
Date: 1/6/2017 10:17:00 PM
Just please tell him not to point that thing in my direction:) I love a happy ending, Mrs Eve.
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