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Cupid, Pulls Back the Bow

I went in search of a Valentine, that could tell her how I wanted her to be only mine. There were only a few that came close to my need, for one so perfect, for love indeed. As moments pass and quickly goes time, I had still not found a fitting Valentine. Then came to me another thought, perhaps a card was needed not. So I sat down and jotted some lines, that I could use for my Valentine. My words were poor and the effort tart, to tell this Beauty all in my heart. Cupid must have been near that day, his arrow hit its mark you see FOR FROM THAT DAY, SHE STAYED WITH ME. 1/2/17

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Date: 1/5/2017 7:13:00 PM
Dan: Well done. Very clever heart shape and I'm glad it "worked" for you. :o) Keep them coming. We appreciate you sharing them with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Date: 1/6/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for your comments Old Buck. I hope you keep them coming as well.
Date: 1/5/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thanks, Phil. I couldn't get a better heart shape, but at least you got the picture. lol
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Date: 1/4/2017 8:40:00 AM
Good one Dan, good luck in the contest.
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