Csi

I wrote a haiku for you, alongside a picture I drew. Every passerby, a witness approved. Yet! Always something comes-- between you and me... (Once again) The evidence has been washed away by the sea.

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Tim Smith

Date: 11/22/2015 5:18:00 AM

Intriguing poem Red. My daughter is interested in this field of study.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2015 10:34:00 AM

I know what you mean. Dipped down to 7 degree f this morning here

Red Barchettadrive
Date: 11/22/2015 10:31:00 AM

Would be an interesting field of study! It's just too cold for me to be outstanding in any field, especially today! Brrrrr...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/22/2015 3:08:00 AM

Always something comes between you and me... This line says so much ..and describes why such evidence is always washed away at sea..Mysterious..but one can find conclusions .. Good poem with so much thought. I used to watch CSI on.earlier days..Lately I like too see Twenty-four hours solved mystery . : )