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Crying

The fog lifts and it is like tears fell and stuck on the bushes. Branches lined with ice and raindrops hanging from the tips. Emotions frozen on the ground with snow that doesn’t move. Waiting for the sun that is trying to come out between clouds. To make everything bright, glistening upon what may happen. In a dream of today, to erase nightmares from the night before. So fears lift like the fog and the bushes don’t look to be crying. Heidi Sands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/6/2017 8:09:00 AM
What a powerful piece Heidi. Sad yet beautiful, I hope to write this well someday. :)"
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/6/2017 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Edward - You already write this well :) :) double smile.
Date: 1/5/2017 8:06:00 PM
Sadly, a lovely moving piece Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/6/2017 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 1/5/2017 10:23:00 AM
This is really beautiful and emotional...What a great choice of words !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 1/4/2017 5:06:00 PM
I agree w/the other talented poets/poetesses, that this is a wonderfully melancholy poem, Heidi. It speaks of hope and sadness. More of hope, which is a good thing of course. But the sadness conveyed is equally heartfelt. This poem brought tears inside my joy. Lovely poem, lady. May the light of love guide your path to peace.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2017 5:19:00 PM
Hi Freddie. Yes, it is a combination of both. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. I appreciate it . Happy New Year
Date: 1/4/2017 12:31:00 PM
sullenly beautiful; i am moved by your words, heidi..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette :)
Date: 1/4/2017 10:37:00 AM
Heidi, this poem is sad but has so much hope laced through the lines. This was absolutely beautiful.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/4/2017 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Chris for your visit and kind comment :)

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