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Crushed Innocence

Hitting the road Faster , faster I defy a red light Past the howl of crude winds--- her memory like a sharp blade ripping love’s fragrant satin sheets; a primrose in disguise, mocking my innocence. For Tarot Contest of nette onclaud Written by Franco Gonza No.1--The Fool 23 Jan 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/27/2015 11:12:00 PM
Franco, Congratulations **SKAT LOVE**
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Date: 2/25/2015 4:34:00 PM
Like your take on the theme - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2015 2:13:00 PM
wow, you really thought outside the box on the "fool" card. I loved that card as well. Congrats. An awesome poem
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Date: 2/25/2015 1:48:00 PM
I got hit by this, franco.. uniquely expressed!.. thanks for joining my contest and huge congrats!
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Date: 1/24/2015 9:10:00 AM
Nice expressions on love and its betrayal,
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