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Crushed Concrete

CRUSHED CONCRETE UNSTEELED / SEPTEMBER BLUES BOMBS xxxxxxxxxx HOPE RUINS xxxxxxxxxxx PEACE DRONES xxxxxxxxx LOVE MEMEME xxxxxxxxx KIND xx EGOEGO xxxxxx NESS DIVISION xxxxxxx COM *** HIERARCHY *** PASSION HEGEMONY xxxxxxx EMPATHY HELL BENT DOGMA xxxxxxx CONCRETE S R << << TOWER xxxxxxxxxx T E <<< xxxxxxx CONCRETE E S ////// PLAIN PLANE MAD TERROR~~~ ILLUSION xxxxxxxx E E \\\\\\ BAD HUMAN FLIGHT ERROR~~~ xxxxxxx CONCRETE L R WIN DECEPTION xxxxxx E V CRUS GS << DEFENCE xxxxxxxx D E HED DELUSION xxxxxxx DECLINE xxxxxxxxx HELP DELUGE xxxxxxxxx HELP US xxxx CAPITAL xxxxx MULTI *** MILITARY xxxxx CULTURE xxxxINDUSTRY xxxx SKIN xxxxxxxx POVERTY TONE GREED xxxxxxxxxxx COLOUR xx DISCRIMINATION BLIND COLONIALISATION x ONE RACE CIVIL WAR xxxxxxxx SOCIAL REST UNCIVIL WAR xxxxx TRUCE TRUTH xxxxxx DIE-VERSITY DIVERSITY xx SHARES STOCKS CO xxxxxx HIERARCHY OPERATION SHACKLES xxxxxxx FREEDOM DOMINATION xxxxxx LIBERTY DESTRUCTION xxxxx xxxx HAPPINESS xxxx xxxx INEQUALITY xx xxxx JUSTICE xxxxxx xxxx MONEY xxxxxx xxxx EQUALITY xxxx CRIME CRIME CRIME REASON YES REASON TWO PILLARS ONE PLANET CRUSHED CONCRETE ONE MAD IGNORANT WORLD

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Date: 7/13/2019 12:49:00 PM
This was a fun read. Wonderful work my friend. Ann
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Date: 7/10/2019 4:29:00 PM
very impressive.
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Date: 7/8/2019 6:46:00 PM
reads like a phrophetic and realistically paranoid computer printout. diabolically deep. well done. feel free to read/comment on mine on poetrysoup.com. sincerely, Mr. Daniel Schack
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/10/2019 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Daniel. I appreciate this. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 7/8/2019 3:17:00 PM
Powerful words and powerfully structured. A true wake up call. Masterfully penned.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/10/2019 6:05:00 AM
Thank you Franci. I had forgotten that I had written this poem. Shape poems are a great challenge. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 12/29/2016 2:16:00 PM
WHOA Congratulations on POTD
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/30/2016 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Donna.
Date: 12/28/2016 1:01:00 AM
Must be Aleppo. You illustrate the sheer insanity and bloodlust . Hatred everywhere. A poem to shake and wake us up. Jannie
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:37:00 AM
It is Aleppo and everywhere...
Date: 12/28/2016 12:12:00 AM
It really amazes me to the max+++++++++++++ congrats on being selected++++++++++
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:37:00 AM
Thank you Bernard. I appreciate this and I am chuffed...
Date: 12/27/2016 1:46:00 PM
a very extraordinary piece of art
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:38:00 AM
Thank you Neo...
Date: 12/27/2016 1:23:00 PM
impressive write, worthy of the poem of the day feature and applause, well done.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:39:00 AM
Thank you Casarah. My message for the New Year. Blessings and wishes, Kai
Date: 12/27/2016 9:47:00 AM
Your heavy concrete poem conked me on the head w/it's profound truth, Michael. An outstanding poem, visually and intellectually. Keep dropping the knowledge and love. Yep, I gonna have to say ... keep dropping the bomb on us. Greetings w/love from Dr. Strangelove. Have a blessed holiday. And congrats on POTD. Love and peace to you.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:39:00 AM
Thanks Freddie. Wishes for the New Year. Love and Peace to you too...XXX Kai
Date: 12/27/2016 8:54:00 AM
Kai, great vision. Quite a crushing there. Since, have we become "used" to acts of terror? Are we getting somewhat desensitized? I think so.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:40:00 AM
Thank you. True. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 12/27/2016 8:17:00 AM
It sure is a mad world. No corner is safer than the center, everywhere is damaged! Congratulation on a potd, Kai.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:40:00 AM
Mad world indeed. May there lies a better year ahead of us. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 12/27/2016 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD honors Kai...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2016 2:41:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. Wishing you and all of us a good New Year. Kai
Date: 12/27/2016 6:21:00 AM
- Creative and powerful, Kai - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/27/2016 4:30:00 AM
Hi Kai. All in capitals. How much passion and anger ? Is this for Aleppo or SA? Some have a white chrismas we have a wet chrisrmas dripping in blood. It all upsets me.
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Date: 12/25/2016 12:15:00 PM
*tears* Kai this is outspokenly captivating. Well done my friend!! Well done!! Big Hugggs!! Deb
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/26/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thanks Deb. We will have to wait for what 2017 brings. The doers and shapers might need a little help from ordinary people...
Date: 12/25/2016 6:33:00 AM
KAI!! I have no words for it. Not only is it visually stunning, but the message in it, the terror and all that pain, before and ever since. I don't care how well or bad you do in any contest... For me THIS is it. 7 and fav.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/26/2016 1:33:00 AM
Thanks Darren. Wishing for a better 2017...

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