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crumble to dust - 5 line contest

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crumble to dust - 5 line contest

My inner Stonehenge
Shielding memories, encircled within
a circle of stone, no code to crack
time to let go, to not look back
let your circle of stones crumble to dust

Penned  18 July 2013

Category   Nature

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:10:00 PM
    The bad thing about memories is that they're not composed of anything material. I forget the exact quote, but something about the hardest thing to kill is an idea or dream. Great work Seren.

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Seren, I like the imagery in this! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 12:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on another quiver in your bow sweetie xx

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:24:00 PM
    Hi Seren, a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:43:00 AM
    amazing you are, ... congrats! ~SKAT~

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/20/2013 12:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wish SKAT ...Seren
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:16:00 AM
    Seren, this is a very nice tanka. I bet you could enter it in a magazine or something and be accepted. Congrats on your win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/20/2013 12:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea. ....Seren
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:16:00 PM
    congrats Seren on your 4th place win in the "nature" portion of the contest

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/18/2013 10:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Francine, .....Seren
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:35:00 PM
    This is a fantastic and fabulous write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, one that I can relate too! Just a note, the fourth line of your awesome poem has a typo, I imagine you meant the line to read, "time to let go, to not look back"! Just trying to help you out my friend, I want you to do well in the contest! I entered a big time poem yesterday, I hope the subject matter isn't too serious for this contest! This is an outstanding piece, Great work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 7/17/2013 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks my faithful watchdog. was a typo, I actually had written the category when i wrote it obviously didnt copy Thanks again Russell...Seren
    Sivey Avatar Russell Sivey
    Date: 7/17/2013 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You also need to write the category that this poem is written in, they are a)humorous, b)serious, or c)nature! I just hope you read this and do that before the contest is finalized!