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Cruise Nightmare

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Below is the poem entitled Cruise Nightmare which was written by poet Abdulhafeez Oyewole. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Cruise Nightmare

In the middle of
an ocean, a heavy storm 
raid... a ship capsized.

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Hello A O, he he, this is a scary thought as well. LOVED IT! Thank you for sharing. I'll be back later on tonight if not on my next day off. How about naming a particular poem, on your list. I can't wait to read the poem you highly recommend. Take Care and have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:44:00 AM
    Awesome Haiku..... very well done A.O. - - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Very unique and creative..Enjoyed reading this one today..I can't imagine what a person would feel and experience in that situation..You have expressed it very well..Thanks for stopping by... I am glad that you got a laugh..Sara

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:00:00 AM
    raided by the ocean...I like it...good image :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:41:00 AM
    This is beautifully sad poem my dear friend AO. This reminds me of the Titanic movie ;). It's an awesome haiku indeed! Thank you so much for sharing and also for your precious time stopping by leaving me an inspiring comment and warm congratulations on my poems. Good luck and wishing you all the best my dear friend! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 8:19:00 AM
    Hi, there, this is nice. I'll go answer your soupmail now.

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 5:47:00 AM
    This is an awesome Haiku Abdulhafeez, you've done very good for the Ocean-ku contest...that is if you submitted it into the contest! What an outstanding poem, a lovely piece, Great Work!!