Crucified

in love he held hands out wore the flowerless crown and hung on the branches of faith ignored

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/27/2021 5:32:00 AM

So much said in such few words. A beautiful cinquain, Sandra! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/26/2021 1:47:00 AM

A beautiful Cinquain on the redeemer. Congratulations!

Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/1/2013 3:46:00 PM

"Branches of faith". What faith it took for Jesus to trust His father's plan for salvation, and what amazing faith we are saved by!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2013 12:00:00 PM

This is so moving! I feel blessed reading it.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/29/2013 9:51:00 AM

Wow Sandra, such a stunning portrayal of the crucifiction. Superb write

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2013 11:57:00 AM

bold write, sandra... the pleaure and pain of affection so well expressed!.. thanks for passin through.. :) huggs

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/28/2013 9:56:00 AM

What a powerful and amazing few words! Wow!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/27/2013 4:19:00 PM

such a powerful piece in few words

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2013 10:53:00 AM

Perfection indeed…You speak of His love for us in that while we were yet sinners he died for us..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2013 6:50:00 AM

powerful write Sandra...well written...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2013 9:56:00 PM

LIke Jack here says, this has great impact. That last line nailed it. (Just realized that made a bad pun after I said it!!!) I think you did a splendid cinquain.

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/26/2013 7:34:00 PM

So short but oh such meaning and impact! Love Jack xoxox