"crossed Lines"

Lines we've crossed in life that put our souls in a place to speak with no lines... The "Line" contest...by Paula Swanson

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Date: 9/23/2010 4:48:00 PM

Nice Michael, the truth is in ever line in our lives. Good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Date: 9/23/2010 2:23:00 PM

Oh wow! Looks like we had the same trend of thought, Michael! Good luck in Paula's "Line" Contest! Peace, Audrey

Date: 9/22/2010 2:46:00 PM

I wouldn't change a word, Michael. This is awesome! Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn

Date: 9/21/2010 6:07:00 PM

More awesome ..speaks volumes Michael and so intricate in its meaning luv.. enjoyed very much your perspective ..luv..

Date: 9/21/2010 6:07:00 PM

Good luck if for Paula's contest my White Knight...

Date: 9/21/2010 7:45:00 AM

Very wonderful write on the theme of line, Michael

Date: 9/21/2010 4:41:00 AM

Wow, one has no choice but to think further while reading just the words to this piece Michael.. Very insightful, lv Wilma ps: a fav once again

Date: 9/20/2010 5:05:00 PM

hope you did not see the other comment...I got my wires crossed! sorry.

Date: 9/20/2010 2:52:00 PM

Deep meaning behind this poem, Michael. I sometimes toe the line, but am wary of crossing it. Excellent entry for the contest! Love, Carolyn

Date: 9/20/2010 2:49:00 PM

Reads like a great winner to me..Good luck in the contest...I am glad that I chose this one to read tonight..Sara