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Crocodile Tears

I put a smile even my heart is on vile Dreading each step I made on each tile Spikes of bounty promises, curves of guile With you on top, an all around the bush lie Selfless service we forgo never denied You repaid nothing but your useless pride Hopes afire, spirit wanting to soar high Yet it seems everyday your deeds all a defy I greeted you with warm sweet hello Similar to white angels with golden halo Yet you dismissed and discharged so cold I wish I still can hold... strongly behold Of dreams unforgotten 'til dawns of tomorrow Didn't barrow, bravely wandering like a sparrow Bearing all thorns and cross, I absolutely follow Is Tunnel of success on six feet under hallow? (C) olive eloisa 8:02 pm May 14,2014

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/15/2014 12:09:00 PM

philosophical but down to earth, olive... great poetic force within your lines.. magpakatotoo tayo!.. good job!... huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 11:25:00 AM

Thank you much Nette really appreciate your drop by..:) hugs mumumuuuch

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 9:32:00 AM

this is an awesome poem Olive.... SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Skat..:)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/15/2014 8:10:00 AM

It is sad that for some success is only achieved by being the devil. A succes connected with the halo is a lasting and meaningful succes.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2014 11:16:00 AM

Thanks much Richard :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2014 4:05:00 AM

- A proficient and deep poem, Olive! - When we in Norway talk about "CROCODILE TEARS" we mean "fake" tears. - Is it the same with you (?) - Have a nice day my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:01:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise really need those hugs..:)GBU

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2014 4:40:00 AM

- I transfer 54 warm hugs ..... do you need more :) <3 2 U !!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 4:34:00 AM

thanks Anne Lise please give me a hug.. :_

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/15/2014 4:30:00 AM

- In your poem ... yes, I understood that :) -

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 4:26:00 AM

It's not fake dear.. It's real just hiding from the smile...

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/14/2014 4:47:00 PM

Olive! This AWESOME! I really enjoyed

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:03:00 AM

Thanks Ivo..:)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/14/2014 3:46:00 PM

Yes we see the smile but many times we don't see the tears inside...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:05:00 AM

Thanks Tim.. GBU :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2014 3:46:00 PM

Hi, Olive. it was nice to see your words today. Nice rhyming, sweetie.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:05:00 AM

Thanks Andrea..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/14/2014 3:14:00 PM

Some people manage to put on a brave face, even when they have been hurt or let down (especially by those who are egoistic and fail to notice the good qualities of those around them). // powerfully expressed thoughts. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:07:00 AM

Weeee yes Paul.. It's so stressful that you need to put a smile and maintain all is well when inside you're already boiling..

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/14/2014 1:57:00 PM

I love the depth in this soulful and passionate write. Very expressive and nicely rhymed. Great poem, Olive Eloisa!.... Thank you so much for the kind congrats. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:08:00 AM

Thanks much Kelly..:) gbu

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/14/2014 12:14:00 PM

WOW!! ..what a deep and superb write!! ..heavy lines and brave thoughts... your pen is shouting like a craving wolf!!! very well expressed!! I like... :O))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/15/2014 5:08:00 AM

Thanks much Aiyah..:) GBU