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Crocodile Haiku

Crocs open jaw waits
Posing in murky water
Statuesque for bait~

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  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:33:00 AM
    This is a strong haiku, loved it...Raul

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 1:12:00 AM
    very creative this piece! a nice haiku... ~ Arany

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 12:50:00 AM
    Clever writing Jane.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 8:23:00 PM
    Nice use of this short form. I had to chuckle at the last line. Maybe I'm a bit warped. Anyway, I enjoyed this haiku. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 3:47:00 PM
    EEp! "Posing in murky water" Great line. Awesome Haiku. Love Chirstie

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 2:54:00 PM
    Wonderful Haiku.. love this write very much..great write.

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 1:26:00 PM
    Great Haiku, Jane. I'm not sure about the "s" in "waits." I like the "murky water" Good job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/24/2009 12:30:00 PM
    Perfection in the form and the descriptiveness is wonderful all coming together well for this haiku. Michael