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Below is the poem entitled Critiqued which was written by poet Anna J Carroll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Me...flawed private facade
Unmasked public despair
Looked upon and onto buildings
Filling open space
Galaxy crossing,nation wide
Devils in disguise spat in the 
Of the one who makes you
Remorseful and unremarked
Deeply undermined
Gradually tormented
But yet successful
So I ask
"Who are you to critique and 
lessen the quality of my work?"
I,but a profound pebble tossed 
into a lake of surcease
My own art in which I lay 
I laugh in your face
Not to be taken down from the 
Standing here ready for your 
You...flawless public facade
Masking private despair
Looked upon yet onto nothing
Filling only your own
Critics become the critiqued

Copyright © Anna J Carroll

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  1. Date: 12/30/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Anna just brilliant....David