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Crimson Tide Time

Cornering me in the bedroom's corner, you say it doesn't matter
if the lunar clock is striking twenty eight;
we can set ourselves adrift, unpick the anchorage,

the tide turning for our pleasure.
The slide inside smoother, slicker, tonight;
oddly intimate, skin-to-skin, coral depths pulling you in.

The red wave gathers, breaks, slowly spills and seeps,
creeps down my leg; neither of us cares.
We're lost in lunar loving beneath a bloodstained moon.

Our bodies cling and cleave, braced against the heave
of the current, wave upon wave of carnal carmine;
plunging deeper into the red sea,

your urging surging through me,
pulsing forward with the flood of my blood,
wet, now, with the cochineal essence of me.

Scarlet secrets of the sea cave within;
each warm gush brings a fresh flush of lust,
as the red anemone of my womb

tenses to release rivulets of rubies
and my muscles contract redly around you,
swelling to hold you with a hotter grip.

We're maroon-mottled, musky with lust,
as the crimson current churns and swirls around us.
And we're surrendering to it, going with the flow,

our skin streaked with scarlet tidemarks,
slippery with passion's puce pattern,
as the sea sweeps a new sensuality ashore.

You're dizzy-drunk on my body's heady claret,
sweat-silvered and ruby-jewelled, as you slowly withdraw,
leaving a smattering of glistening garnets on the bedroom floor.

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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:27:00 AM

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:21:00 PM
    WOW! You certainly achieved sensual. I am almost certain that you included every known variation on red. Nice work, and congratulations. Justly deserved. Jack

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:36:00 PM
    very nice...congrats

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:47:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Charlotte! A great write indeed! Thanks also for sharing! Have a great day in sunshine! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:39:00 AM
    I read it many times for its sheer beauty, thnx for sharing and congrats:) Jag

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Charlottel, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:10:00 PM
    Gulp..boldly going where few have gone before ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 5:43:00 PM
    awesome poem, Charlotte! You are very good with this sensual stuff. :) Congratulations on your big win in Cyndi's contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 9:59:00 AM
    gracefully written this passionate piece of excellent poetry with smears of D H lawarence!!!! bravo!!!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Im delightedly surprised! I have to visit your poetry more frequently, Charlotte! This poem is superb; you should be proud of it. Excellent! Congratulations on your deserved 1st place in Cyndi's contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:37:00 AM
    Wow, this one was well worth a return performance, truly sensual!

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:39:00 PM
    From a woman who a man who has learned...:-)

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 11:57:00 AM
    Havn't seen you (are anyone) for awhile, so I decided to come back and indulge in more of your backlog writing. I was lucky! Got my Eros fix, too...a double (Sorry--freudian slip there). Seriously, an exciting write. Hope you will come back to my page again. It is lonely. :-)

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 12:13:00 AM
    * "I Could Read Intensely Erotic & Completely Beautiful Poem A Thousand Times * My Dear Sweet, Unique & Beautiful Charlotte * Never to Grow Tired Amid Its Mesmerizing Images & Passion * Makes One Wish That Were There to But Enjoy Such Wonderful Beauty * Speechless In Spellbound * My Luv, Beyound The Ends of Endless Time * Sarah." *

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 1:08:00 AM
    Wonderfully done erotica, Charlotte. I thought at first it could be for the full moon contest and then as it grew more erotic, I realized I was wrong!

  1. Date: 10/28/2011 1:08:00 AM
    I think Frank is going to put this one super high.

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 3:49:00 PM
    * “Ow * I Love The Intensity In This Eroticisms Moment * Smearing It All These Soft Mountains to Climb * Owww, Sooo Beautiful Charlotte * Luv * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 10/26/2011 6:33:00 PM
    Smile, *^_^* “Yeppp, No Doubt About the Erotic's Red Tide Waves Amid This Rolling Sea's Caught In A Riptides Spit Me Upon the Shore Bare & Naked Within, WoW *^_#* My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Charlotte! * What Else Can I Say Except, Just Another of Your Beauties Jewels In Unique!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *