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Crimson Rose Premiere Contest Winner

Crimson rose from yesterday, what turned you pale and gray? Where is the scent of sweet perfume, That filled your every day? Your petals have all fallen in the chilly autumn air. Shinny leaves, of forest green have left you, cold and bare. Was your beauty squandered in the warmth of summer light? Did you listen to the promises that faded through the night? Your heart was made for lovely things. You were made to dance and sing. Your time was spent in celebrating, the peace and joy you bring. written 09.01.2016 Brain Strand's 208 contest

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Date: 8/27/2018 10:08:00 PM
What a beauty! You are a poet's poet my friend! Congratulations on your deserving trophy win! : )
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Date: 10/30/2016 5:41:00 PM
wow, so glad you got a TROPHY for this one. WAY to go, Francis.
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Date: 9/23/2016 8:19:00 PM
wow, I see a trophy win with this one BIG congrats!!
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Date: 9/21/2016 10:40:00 AM
Lovely write Francis and congratulations on a well deserved win...
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/21/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. ...Fran
Date: 9/21/2016 9:42:00 AM
Such a beautiful tribute to the 'crimson rose', Francis. And, I feel the underlying metaphor too. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/21/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Yes, it does have deeper meaning for me. ... Fran
Date: 9/21/2016 7:38:00 AM
Francis- lovely poem :) congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/21/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you. Laura! ...Fran
Date: 9/16/2016 5:41:00 PM
Wonderful writing! Great, uplifting read.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/18/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Joe! ...Fran
Date: 9/15/2016 9:46:00 AM
Beautiful write Francis...
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/15/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 9/10/2016 6:02:00 PM
True beauty comes from the heart; not the petal or the leaf, Andrea.
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Date: 9/8/2016 6:53:00 PM
Ahh, I feel sorry for this crimson rose turning . She reminds me a little bit of myself.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/10/2016 5:56:00 PM
no! no! no!
Date: 9/1/2016 10:55:00 AM
Lovely Quatrain Francis...
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 9/1/2016 11:53:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie.

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