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Crescendo of Love Poem2

music aching, longing sacred romance kindled l yrical expression heart’s journey Psalmist Written by: Lori Marie McClure 9/9/11 For Nette Oclaud's contest: Melody of Cinquain

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George Aul

Date: 9/13/2011 2:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win........George

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/12/2011 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Lori

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/12/2011 4:30:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, a lovely romantic cinquain :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Lori. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 9/11/2011 4:09:00 PM

Congrats Lori on your win in the contest...enjoyed very much....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2011 3:05:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

David Williams

Date: 9/11/2011 3:42:00 AM

Lori, many congrats on your brilliant win..David

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/11/2011 1:20:00 AM

congratulations Lori. Well done. cheers Marg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/10/2011 11:21:00 PM

Congrats Lori on sweet success with this brilliant beauty Cinquain luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/10/2011 10:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Lori! Kim

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/10/2011 9:26:00 PM

Great work, congratulations on your win. Lee

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2011 2:40:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..One of the best..Winning material for sure..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 9/9/2011 2:35:00 PM

This is very nice Lori...check syllable count of 4th line please...should be 8 but here it is 9...regards.

Lori Lucas Mcclure
Date: 9/9/2011 2:52:00 PM

Thank you again and this is getting comical I use the scite I mention in the ealier post to you and it says 8 syllables. I don't know why it would be different!!! I 'm going to just let it ride! I can't keep changing it! Lol I'd be here all day!!LOL there will be other contests and having fellow poets comment is as wonderful as winning a contest. Thanks again I appreciate it---Lori

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/9/2011 2:31:00 PM

I want to apologize to everyone concerning my poem Crescendo of Love I had to alter it in Crescendo of Love #2 for Nette Oclaud's contest syllable count was wrong. I thank each of you who read the original verson and commented. Thank you again and sorry for change.---Lori