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Creation Or Destruction

"to be played out as a theatrical battle.creation dressed in white destruction dressed in black" let there be light let there be life let there be love till the end of time the grass,the trees,the birds,the bees... creation bring on the darkness bring on black death bring on mad fear,hate and unrest the fire,the smoke,sad sinners they choke... destruction the living,the giving the helping,the healing growing and glowing good feelings keep flowing... creation stealing and killing destroying and dealing the needy,the nasty,the sour and the seedy toxic waste and the poisonous taste mind pollution to rage revolutions... destruction trust and truth the old and the new out of the black and into the blue... creation lust and lies tangled ties that bind suicide streams and dark devil dreams it ends with a scream revenge on a rope... destruction 2 voices one choice breathe free or take that final breath choose life or choose death look,listen,and learn as the world slowly turns... creation or destruction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2011 4:37:00 PM
Creation: "Let there be light." Distruction: "Bring on distruction. " this is the play setting you should draw. it will cut down on the confusion. otherwise this is a picture of a great battle. T. S.
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Date: 10/23/2010 10:25:00 PM
ANTHONY I WAS JUST THINKING THE SAME EARLIER. THIS POEM IS OUTSTANDING AND HAS LOTS OF MEANING TO THE WORLD WE HAVE CREATED IN A SELF DESTRUCTIVE WAY. ENJOYED YOUR POEM*luv~SKAT
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:19:00 PM
extreamly good flow. enjoyed it muchly. Charles
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:06:00 PM
extreamly the side one can not write about. You have a way with the light and dark my friend'
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Date: 10/20/2010 1:54:00 PM
Exceptional take on the path we're on, Tony..As to the last stanza..it's a good thing that God is just..He fore saw all of this when He gave us free will. Only mercy will save us.. My favorite today. Take care. Love, Audrey
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