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Crazy Risk

One very heavy night Dark, gloomy and pouring It poured unceasing Fear augustly visited my sight. My brothers in the rain To fetch for our stomachs' gain. This fear invited my shaking hands Grabbing hurriedly, tarpaulin weapon Miry clays.... wetlands my weary legs struggled upon. Calmed, I saw my Blood In a tussle with the flood My beloved slippers fled In the cruising angry torrent After them, I fled At my sudden surge of passion current. It was crazy I slipped, headed for the gully Liquid fire, burning and hazy At the edge, my slippers caught equally Me, the slippers, a losing point A hand caught me at the joint. A crazy risk of life My life and a lifeless thing For ten hours and a half i nurtured the worth of living.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/6/2013 8:20:00 PM
I love the way you brought on the Crazy. Goodness, Congratulations!!! :-) .....xox..... LINDA
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Goodness Lanre
Date: 5/7/2013 12:10:00 PM
thANKS PD. ALL THE TIME.
Date: 5/6/2013 8:16:00 PM
Well done congratulations!
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Goodness Lanre
Date: 5/7/2013 12:17:00 PM
THANKS SIR.GL
Date: 5/6/2013 8:04:00 PM
Very tense....congratulations...
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Date: 5/6/2013 7:53:00 PM
Goodness, CONGRATS <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/25/2013 4:52:00 PM
It sounds like you had a very "close call" What ever happened? Were you injured from the mishap? From the sound of the poem, you did not really get hurt. This was an interesting topic.
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:05:00 PM
Great write bro. I like the hyperbole you concluded the poem with.. Cheers~A.O
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