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Crazy Profound 3

(Dedication: For Tim Smith, my PoetrySoup buddy) Sun steers shadow Moon mimes mellow Firm faith follows Day dons deep daze Hurl hollow haze Mist meets mind maze Describe dream dance Passion's plush prance Chasing charm's chance Curves charm clear choice Play plots prime poise Next norm now noise Time transits trip Life loiters leap Soon season sleeps Make motives meet Start story sweet Touch tender treat Be bold belief Rest ripe relief Glimpse gloomy grief Pain paves pathway Cheer calms cold clay Deuce detains day Death deals dire deed Nurture notes need Flesh finds fine feed Leon Enriquez 20 Feb 2014 Singapore

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Skat A

Date: 5/24/2015 12:45:00 AM

I love alliteration. Leon, tonight I will enjoy a few of your first poems. Hugs SKAT

Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/27/2015 8:24:00 AM

Dear Skat: Yes, I hope you enjoyed your sojourn with these thoughts. Thank you. Leon

Nola Perez

Date: 2/20/2014 3:56:00 PM

Leon, I like it, I like it. And thanks for liking mine Nola

Leon Enriquez
Date: 2/20/2014 6:04:00 PM

Dear Nola: Thanks. Leon

Tim Smith

Date: 2/20/2014 10:20:00 AM

Thank you my friend Leon...I started new hours at work just got home and it is 10 am here...I am going to take a nice nap then write something..I have a few ideas but I am getting delusional being up for 28 hrs.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 2/20/2014 10:34:00 AM

Dear Tim: Yup get a good rest. Thanks for your support. I hope you like this piece. Leon