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There is a force upon this earth a force of evil intent disguised by empathy guiding the masses into a feudal system of unequal apportions. Already the wall is built, conjured with a news media of imagery used haphazardly, a wall, to keep in the intellect those who cannot relate to simplicity that, which is the secret of life’s beginning, a wall that nurtures minds of organized chaos whilst prohibiting precious sentiment a ploy of the low life, those kept outside of the wall except for the menial tasks befitting his master! © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Date: 10/8/2012 12:36:00 AM
wow, I found one new for me. and this is a GOOD one, Harry. I know exactly of what you speak. How did you think up that title? well, I had a nice day and it will be even better if I can catch up on comments soon. SEe ya, my friend. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:34:00 AM
Your concept of this "evil wall" is brilliant, Harry. There are forces at work that promote organized chaos and the metaphor you use is deeply thought-provoking. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:20:00 AM
Amazing Harry my friend.. wonderful word for the title and contest entry .. good luck my friend.. u are quite the gem yourself jumping right on this one so fast... my ideas are still floating round in my head ... momentarily on paper luv.. happy weekend...good luck..
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:12:00 AM
Wow Harry - this is good - yes the world is unevenly divided! Liz
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