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Below is the poem entitled Crazed which was written by poet Bindu Vijayan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The moment slithered in slowly
Hissing insanities thru the darkness
Time was bound tight, her bones broken
Mutilated beyond any linear hope

One by one the theories pelted in
Drawing blood and leeching possibilities
Abstracts hurled and tossed their abuses
Arresting escape’s frail wings from taking off

Time coiled tight silent to the ages
Friends and foes, their target singled out
Madness reigned the dark hour in fangs
The sac of hypothesis waiting to spew venom

And so came the final hour of destruction
One last blow to close the kill
Sciences waited in crazed anticipation
But Void finally came down, Time’s illicit lover…

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  1. Date: 1/11/2014 7:40:00 AM
    I enjoyed rereading this one. Good morning Bindu

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/11/2014 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear Richard!
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:14:00 AM
    - Thank you for your beautiful poem,Bindu. (7) !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:18:00 AM
    fine juxtaposition without the dreariness of exposition, ravi... both scientifically and spiritually twined; thus, lovely!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:30:00 PM
    What a great poet you are, such a mystical write, with such power, loved it...peter

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Void and time as illicit lovers. How strange but wonderfully descriptive. At first, as I read stanza one, I thought you were writing for the Frida contest!

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 8:27:00 AM
    Your mind knows no bounds. Spectacular setting! Such visceral power in your lines.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 8:15:00 AM
    oo The moment slithered in slowly. nicely pinned! the word time in this poem entraps the imagery. enjoyed the poem...Linda

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Is this for the science contest? If not you should consider entering it.