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Beneath dotted stars with soft campfire as ally, lone cowboy’s pondering meanders through the sand dunes and night-saloons thumb marked by his blazed rides for pistol quests and fist thugs, as rowdy duels and women’s sighs so adored climb unto a red of greeting sunset. Recalling those dusty trails--pungent and bold-- he descends like a magic bat from nowhere riddling his foes way down the desert floor. Many at times, the sawdust boots reeked from the heat of bandits’ glare as if to pierce his chest one hell of a shot with tassels flowing high unto smoky air. Edifying as he seems, beneath dotted stars, a lone cowboy is simply this: a tender wind mild as his strumming guitar calling for prairies’ honeyed life while a tough leather vest hides his simple, warm nobleness. Howdy Pard Contest of Shadow Hamilton 5/5/2014

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Date: 5/10/2014 1:24:00 PM
Nicely done, Nette. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/8/2014 10:11:00 PM
way to go, COWGIRL. I can see congrats for you and will have to check later and see what number you placed. Hope it was high. you deserved it.
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Date: 5/8/2014 3:10:00 PM
congratulations on your win Nette
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Date: 5/8/2014 12:47:00 PM
Outstanding write, Nette. I see you won with it? Its very deserving, no doubt. Thre are so many great lines...all of them!...and your ending is perfection...muah!
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Date: 5/8/2014 12:00:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette ! Congrats on ur great win !
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Date: 5/8/2014 9:47:00 AM
Hi Nette! You never let your guard down...even a contest with this type of theme still gets your mind working in top gear:) much enjoyed; congrats. // paul
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Date: 5/8/2014 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:59:00 AM
Nette,' Congratulations, enjoying every poem on Shadow's " Howdy Pard" winning list... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:56:00 AM
Wonderful Write, Nette! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, nette!!! :O))
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:08:00 AM
great read and poem Nette congrats on win ty for entering hugs
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Date: 5/8/2014 7:54:00 AM
Congratulation on a fine win on the cowboy theme, nette
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:38:00 AM
Just beautiful as always , Every poem is better than the last and the last was fantastic .
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Date: 5/6/2014 3:35:00 PM
WHAT A FUN READ... the imagery is great... I love it... good luck in the contest Brooke
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:28:00 AM
A perfect ending for a wonderful poem. I can picture the scene so well, I almost want to sneeze from the smell of the sawdust.
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:49:00 PM
Yo, cowgrrrl! I really felt the Wild West that! I can totally hear this as the accompanying song of one of my favorite video game series, Wild ARMs.
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Date: 5/5/2014 9:32:00 PM
Cow girl i love this poem and the ending is right on target, yee haw, I can feel the hot wind of the desert and hear the cow hands singing to the cattle, thanks for taking me back to the old west, lol simply put great job here, it reminds me of home, also thanks for your cool review of my work also it means alot when i get a great comment like yours, have a peaceful night, cheri
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Date: 5/5/2014 5:47:00 PM
this ends up a very tender poem about the cowboy and his simple heart. Very nicely done, Nette. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:35:00 PM
I love your take on the cowboy nette...You electrify the cowboy life..hugs Tim p.s. saloon not salon
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:13:00 PM
You lead me down the path of adventure and then tenderness. Great piece of poetry, Nette. Thank you for choosing my work in your contest.
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:00:00 PM
Ahh!! calling for prairies’ honeyed life while a tough leather vest hides his simple, warm nobleness. Enjoyed reading this contest entry..Way to go ..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit..Haven't heard from you in awhile..Sara
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:52:00 AM
I can see every moment of this in my mind. A very deep and sensitive poem, Nette
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Date: 5/5/2014 10:48:00 AM
Well, a most delightful poem about a real cowboy. He may appear tough but his heart is gentle, rightly so. A pleasure to read you today!
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