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County Trash Detail

Four two four one
Cars racing by stealing
Images of consequences
Entertaining clowns collecting their trash
“That could be me” clicking tongues chirp
Four two four one just smiles
Those were his thoughts

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  1. Date: 6/6/2011 4:54:00 AM
    hmm trying to remember, you changed the POV? is the word "his?" let me know! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 8:45:00 AM
    incredibe, james.. big congrats on the high spot! :) huggs

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 5:29:00 AM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of deb, James

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 5:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Jack Out Of Box" contest James. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 10:15:00 PM
    A quirky form that fits you well, Jimbo. Great stuff here~! Congratulations~!

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:09:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS!!! Well-deserved win!!! ***jun-jun

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 3:40:00 PM
    Congrats James on a spectacular win by stepping out of the box and still creating a lovely treasure my friend.. enjoy ..

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 5:43:00 PM
    You have some BITE here Jamie! Didn't guess it was you either! ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 7:33:00 AM
    Great job, Jim.....I never thought to try this is also one I've never done...but you nailed it beautifully!! Excellent entry....for jumping out of the box!!

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 4:27:00 AM
    Beautiful form nicely explored with this humorous and witty write, Jimbo and good luck in the contest,

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 8:39:00 PM
    Interesting form that's new to me, James. Those last three lines carry your message home nicely. We see the trash collectors and fail to realize they probably had other aspirations, just as we do. Great entry for Deb's contest, Jimbo. Winning wishes coming your way. Love, Carolyn