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Country Swim

.              shoes on river bank
                        best friends visit Sugar Creek
                                Sunday afternoon

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  1. Date: 9/18/2009 12:37:00 PM
    Abe, thanks for prolonging the feeling of summer for me today. All the best, Krista

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 4:24:00 PM
    sounds like warm friendship

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 7:02:00 AM
    those are the best times when you are young just hanging out.

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 5:51:00 PM
    picturesque! nice!...jim

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 4:42:00 PM
    Am I Watching The New Huckleberry Finn ? What a Moment... Very Nice Poem MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 12:03:00 AM
    Very evocative Abe,great visual 'spaces' style poetry.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 9:11:00 PM
    Nice....lovely image...a Sunday afternoon with friends surrounded by nature. "Sunday afternoon" is not only meaninful but beautiful. Great senryu, Abe .

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 2:05:00 PM
    Nice work, I write poetry at this same creek...Raul

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 1:50:00 PM
    Lovely images of friends enjoying the freedom of fun, wonderful - and thank you for my evening of joy reading your incredible poems, well worth the shift if i may say so. Every so often i just pick a name and read as much as i can if not them all, thank you again>>James

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 1:13:00 PM
    buh reminds me of when i swim in muddy rivers.... lost 17 pairs of shoes that way

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:58:00 PM
    Ah, Abe, a delightful description of a refreshing way to spend a warm Sunday afternoon. Excellent! Love, carolyn

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:44:00 PM
    Love the images in this heartwarming Senyru, Abe. It does sound like a great way to spend a Sunday afternoon, kid or grownup! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 11:13:00 AM
    Those were the days! Great poem that brings back memories of visits to the country... before I moved to the country and found peace! Very nice Senryu, Abe. And thanks from the Soupers for your thoughtful comment on School Days. There will be more to come!!! It was fun... as you well know from the poem "The Love of Fine Art." in which you contributed to make another super Souper poem! Thanks! and love to you. Love to you. Dane

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 11:11:00 AM
    Just down the road from a our own Dibble Creek..... Sugar Creek/Dibble Creek....what happy places to spend a Sunday afternoon !! Love this happy poem! Carrie

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 10:52:00 AM
    Hope you behaved yourself Abe. Splendid write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 9:54:00 AM
    Sweet senryu.

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 9:11:00 AM
    thats a nice senryu about bestfriends...visiting the wonderful when bestfriends are there for each other enjoying the fun together,sharing their lives,sorrows and always be good and offer respect to each other--nice senryu-Charma

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 8:57:00 AM
    Sounds like a way to spend a Sunday afternoon. Keep writing. Sara