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Cougar's Hunt

Smelling for its prey,
The cougar is on the hunt;
Run little rabbit.

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  1. Date: 5/6/2009 4:58:00 PM
    Sweet capture!!!

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 9:45:00 PM
    The parallel between the first two lines and its majestic ending is splendid, great closure, my friend. I would add an exclamation mark after rabbit, it's just an idea. Good job, Daniel. Ruben

  1. Date: 2/26/2009 4:42:00 PM
    Interesting use of this short form. Hope that rabbit runs real fast. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 2/26/2009 5:59:00 AM
    I sure hope he gets away. Excellent visuals here and in terrific form. Michael

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 7:05:00 AM
    Aww, poor bunny. Sorry, I know it is nature's course, but still gets to me. Great haiku either way! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 2/25/2009 5:33:00 AM
    Nice haiku Daniel, the cougar is chasing after a poor rabbit, great work...Raul