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Costume Jewels

Queen smiles, watching court jesters parade in costume jewels upon revolving stage living delusions ~*~ Note: For John Freeman's "Dodiostu" Humor Contest

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2013 1:32:00 PM

lol, yes, I can picture this scene : )

James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2011 1:11:00 PM

Visually wonderful, and delightful to read Annalise. When one sees a poem of this class on the podium, you just know the writer and the judge has taste....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations, Annalise, on your fine dodoitsu. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 4:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 2:03:00 PM

wonderful Annalise, congrats on your win also.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 12:23:00 PM

Congrats on your win my dear... well done and written...always Michael

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/17/2011 11:08:00 AM

Hello Annalise, Congratulations on your win, very well done I love this one. As Always, Shar

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/17/2011 10:57:00 AM

lovely one , congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Annalise, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/17/2011 4:50:00 AM

Hello Annalise . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write. . Eamon

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 9:00:00 PM

Good work Analise. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 5:56:00 PM

Congrats Annalise on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 5:55:00 PM

anna, well-done!! radiant in all ways! thumbs up andcheers for the win! : ) nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/16/2011 3:36:00 PM

Congratulations Annalise on your worthy poem's worthy 4th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 3:18:00 PM

So glad to see you in the winners' circle, Annalise. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/16/2011 3:11:00 PM

Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Annalise

John Freeman

Date: 1/15/2011 11:29:00 AM

Annalise, thanks so much for your conscious support of my Contest, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/14/2011 5:58:00 AM

This is a true gem you have posted here, Annalise! Wish you best of luck for John's contest and thank you for your kind comments!..All the best and take care!...Gert

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2011 6:28:00 PM

Excellent imagery, so funny, good luck with this wonderful Dodoitsu. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/13/2011 12:48:00 PM

Awesome creation Annalise and a wonderful entry for John's contest.. good luck.. I simply luv this form and u have created a gem luv.. good luck...

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/13/2011 9:54:00 AM

Wonderful write, good luck in the contest with this beauty. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/13/2011 4:20:00 AM

Stunning Annalise, if they chuck me out of the office it is your fault.. Brilliant write for John's contest.. love Wilma

Diane Locksley

Date: 1/12/2011 11:41:00 PM

This is such a funny image, Annalise but I bet the jesters were having more fun than the queen. Good luck in John's contest. Best to you, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2011 8:20:00 PM

First I chuckled, then I laughed and now I can't stop! The more I picture this scene, the funnier it is. And I love the political statement behind this. It just sneaks up and bites you in the butt. Awesome entry for John's contest, dear. Definitely a winner -- he's a clever guy and I know he's going to see the politics behind this. Love, Carolyn

John Rhinem

Date: 1/12/2011 7:19:00 PM

Smile ~ My third reading upon "This Colourfully Pleasant 'Picturesque Painting,'" made myself laugh aloud; again, "So Bright In, 'A Beautiful Heart of Light!!!'" ~ I hope that "Your Treasures" are doing spendidly ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'My Dear Annalise,' Amid The Ever Twirling & 'Sparkling Colours of, Beautiful Love;' Sweet Dreams My Dear;" Bye!:) ~