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Cosmetic Beauty

What a beautiful face it seems Her teeth is perfect and white as she beams Why don't I have that beauty one screams And so to the beauty parlour with many dreams to get makeup treatments and many creams And another falls to the cosmetic industry schemes For the beautiful face is a product of Photoshop teams Its the lasting inward character beauty that redeems But the passing cosmetic fools gold is what society esteems

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/14/2018 6:54:00 AM

A wonderful Monorhyme you have created Ahmed. One tiny grammar error in your second line should read 'teeth are perfect' This form is challenging and you did very well! : )

Ahmed Sheik Koya
Date: 8/14/2018 11:57:00 AM

Thanks for letting me know and for your encouragement. I have corrected the error now. God Bless.

Ahmed Sheik Koya

Date: 12/10/2016 1:27:00 AM

Yes it was for that contest. However, it didn't make it at all. I am reading all the poems on the soup and trying to learn to better myself. I like rhyming, however, in Fiji, we dont necessarily pronounce everything correctly.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/5/2016 6:53:00 AM

Is this for the 'Fool's Gold' contest? Well done! A fabulous write.

Holly Bohto

Date: 11/23/2016 6:17:00 PM

I really enjoyed this write...nicely structured. Ahmed.

Ahmed Sheik Koya
Date: 11/25/2016 5:05:00 PM

Thank you. I have just started after a break of 40 years and so this is an encouragement to me.