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Cool Brute Drum Dumb

cool brute drum dumb classical knives high above weeds buzz -ed soldiers slip though the grip of tanks shooting shells washing on the sea strewn with bodies white lime -stones the bright sun crosses the high -way spitting cars for miles and mile -s wishing to be…

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Date: 5/8/2014 10:16:00 AM
Hello Alex, . Thank you so much for enjoying and supporting my "ANY POEM" contest...... Stop by my latest blog --Raindrops and roses-- if you'd like to receive a cute Congratulations. Wishing all winning poets a great day. Love Linda :-)
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:25:00 AM
this one HITS hard!!! The part about bodies reminded me of a scene in Hotel Rwanda.
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Date: 11/17/2013 12:42:00 AM
wow.. Alex.. that was really something... love it...LINDA
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