Cookie

Cookie Warm, golden Gazing, longing, tempting Diet, restrained, guilt, resignation Biting, chewing, swallowing Moist, delicious Cookie

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2017 9:32:00 PM

Did you know this was your BEST poem according to Soup? I am a foodie so I sure do like it!

John Michaels
Date: 7/1/2017 5:22:00 AM

I know, it's strange really... there must be something about it that's struck a chord with people. Has been a while since I've tackled this form, so maybe I need to have another look! Thanks for your comments! John.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/3/2017 5:09:00 AM

Good Morning John. I turned to this entry at random. The Diamante format is so unique. In my opinion you stayed true to the form and its rules. You delivered a playful and upbeat theme. No one could argue with the thought of a cookie. Well done entirely in format and theme. Have a wonderful morning and day.

John Michaels
Date: 6/4/2017 12:32:00 PM

Thanks, Lisa. Definitely one of my early efforts, but pleased it is still being enjoyed by people! All the best, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2014 4:01:00 PM

hey, you went right back to cookie again. Is that diamante? It's been so long since I tried this form. This was a fun one.

John Michaels
Date: 5/21/2014 7:38:00 AM

Thanks for the positive comments. I actually wrote this early last year and - from what I remember at the time - I thought it was okay to start and end on the same word... oh well, glad you enjoyed it.