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Conversations of Love

I hear you speaking words of love Although the words are sweet Don't forget they're right above Your bitter heartbeat The yelling and shouting hurts Speaking words of anger Acts of kindness in spurts Bitterness is the danger So remember to forgive All the pain reminded of I'm yearning you to live Conversations of love

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James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2009 10:44:00 AM

Lovely poem Abe, thank you for your kind comments on my work>>James

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 6:28:00 PM

Nice work, hope you do good in the next round with this one...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/28/2009 6:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/31/2009 11:33:00 AM

Congrats Abe on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/31/2009 10:50:00 AM

Congrats on making it through the first round of the contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 3/31/2009 2:10:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the PS contest.Best wishes for the next round Abe.Rgds Brian

Sue Mason

Date: 3/29/2009 11:44:00 AM

The last line could surely be a song !! Just beautifully written, Abe and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/26/2009 8:33:00 AM

Congrats Abe on your quatrain "Conversations of Love" being featured. Vince

Kirstie Fontes

Date: 3/25/2009 10:56:00 AM

Beautiful! Congrats on the feature! Kirstie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/25/2009 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 11:37:00 PM

Deep poem and congrats on your feature. Tyler

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/23/2009 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 3/23/2009 12:53:00 AM

Congrats on your feature this week Abe.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/17/2008 10:41:00 AM

First of all this is a stunning and spectacular piece! The conversations that a baby in the womb listens to is a part of their development. This is a masterful, clever write. The way you portray a bitter mother pretending to be sweet, when the baby within her knows different. Genius!!!

Michael Torres

Date: 11/17/2008 12:11:00 AM

Abe this is nice. Really touching write. Michael Torres