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Conversation With An Angel

She felt the pain and loss of the gain of a midnight true love’s dream. No one to blame she left and came and I asked her, “how did it seem?” “Oh heaven, you mean? It’s beautiful and serene like I thought it would be. I saw your tears when you said goodbye, and thank you for setting me free.” I sat in fear, so unclear, she's really here! “Why did you choose to visit me?” She said softly, “honey, I’m so sorry...I can’t forget the look in your eyes,” Down on one knee, I beg and plead, “do you regret what you took to my cries?” She sat and pondered and I sat and wondered, “how could she want to die?” I stood and wandered, for I was younger but I still needed a reason why. “I hid right under the bridge from the thunder, no more seasons to try." I needed assurance, “dear sister, do you ever wish you could take it back?” She pleaded in endurance, “dear sister, forever it’s been self-love that I lacked.” I believed her story, she now lives in glory, but to her I must always remind, “your life was stormy and lived too shortly, don’t forget I always strived to find a way to rid a soul forlornly, left so sorely, you’ll always be on my mind.” *True story based on a dream I had last year of my sister who took her own life* Internal Rhyme Used Conversation Contest Sponsor: Frank Hererra Date Written: September 4, 2016

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Date: 9/5/2016 7:55:00 AM
A deep and beautiful write....
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2016 10:05:00 AM
thanks you sweet Supraja :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2016 8:56:00 PM
Hi Luloo, this is a write that could make the coldest heart shed tears. Iy made mine shed tears. As i try to write this comment through blurry eyes my heart reaches for you in life's spiritual realm. There is great sadness in this write Laura but within this sadness you have created a beauty that i see in the heart of your write. Even through the sadness love does shine. I have to read this write again. Sometimes it is good to cry, makes one feel human. This is a 7 and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/5/2016 10:05:00 AM
oh! don't cry! thank you so much for all your kindest words you bring to my pages :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2016 7:12:00 PM
Sadly beautiful
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Date: 9/4/2016 7:34:00 PM
thank you Mike :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2016 4:33:00 PM
Amazing girl your writes are so good. Good luck in the contest Hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/4/2016 7:33:00 PM
thank you lovely Eve :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2016 12:35:00 PM
wow, you came up with a very thoughtful way to do this challenge. So sorry again about your sister. you have taken that pain and you have been putting it into your writing. That is a marvelous thing, dear I hope Frank will be touched by this.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/4/2016 2:05:00 PM
thank you Andrea, even if he doesn't find it winning worthy I found it healing to write. :)-luloo

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