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Contemplation - Rumi

CONTEMPLATION - RUMI Alone, atop a stony perch, I sit entranced by the unmoving road which unlike the moving river flows neither - to or from- just is. In the darkly stained pavement I seek evidence of man’s true nature await a vision of his divinity seek his connection to his God. A light rain swirls in oily rainbows earthbound aurora reflecting moonlight a miniature solar system resplendent in the charisma of its stirring milky way. Adrift upon this mist of color, reaching to touch the edges of life peace finds me rooted to a broken barrier pleading with myself to release its hold. I glimpse the eternity of presence denied – not to me – but by me retreat into the loneliness of fear feel the cold wet rain flow past. VISUAL #5 submitted to CONTEMPLATION - Poetry contest sponsor – Mystic Rose 5/1/2015

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Date: 5/8/2015 3:58:00 AM
To seek the true nature of man and the way He is connected to the creator.To stay stiil,in solitude and listen to the silence,to fear death,and to grab peace and hold on to it..An inspirational poem,almost invites one to metidate about where He is in his life and what is his life made of.Excellent !!! John.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine for your comment and support they are always appreciated.
Date: 5/7/2015 4:24:00 PM
Rereading this and thinking how great you did. I fully expect to see this one high on her list!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2015 6:32:00 PM
AWWW....now cut that out. Thanks Andrea, with you thinking so highly of this poem it will be a double winner if it places in the contest. Thanks for your continued support and input.
Date: 5/2/2015 2:14:00 AM
Atmospheric! Julia, :)
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Julia Ward
Date: 5/8/2015 5:27:00 AM
Yes, John, re. yours of 6:30 PM. Charmaine could learn from my post's brevity. Julia, :)
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2015 6:30:00 PM
BEST ONE WORD COMMENT EVER....Thanks Julia, I appreciate your support.
Date: 5/1/2015 10:33:00 PM
you did very well with her theme, John. I am not so good at writing about profound topics but I hope to try this one. I really enjoyed your poem.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2015 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, always appreciate your comments and interest.
Date: 5/1/2015 6:35:00 PM
Very much like your 3rd stanza, John. Best wishes for the contest...
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John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2015 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Mark, I've fallen a bit behind in responding to the comments. appreciate your interest

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