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Contemplating Death

In the middle of the universe I stand So alone, though surrounded by love Afraid of today, more afraid of tomorrow I know nothing beyond this small room So alone, though surrounded by love My fate in the hands of hopeful men I know nothing beyond this small room Standing on the precipice of the unknown My fate in the hands of hopeful men Afraid of today, more afraid of tomorrow One with all of those who have gone before In the middle of the universe I stand

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Date: 2/15/2015 11:09:00 AM
BARBARA, Congratulations on your awesome win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Way to go well no not way to go..Uh!! Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2015 1:22:00 PM
I enjoyed your contemplation, did you enter this one in the contest? If so I wish you much luck Barbara. Very effective use of the form.
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Date: 2/6/2015 7:54:00 AM
Loved it Barbara.Hugs!..rajat
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Date: 2/5/2015 11:31:00 PM
beautiful...a single reflection recorded P.S. check spelling of title!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/6/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thank you so much..I completely missed that..and thanks for your comment on the piece. Barbara

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