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Conscious Beings

Being of a conscious form Seeing, aware of the view All your thoughts and wonders born We have our patterns and blunders too It can be hard, and we can be torn While creating this brilliant hue Growing, intending to teach Sewing a fabric never complete Spreading awareness, hoping to reach Showing fairness and kindness replete And yet, in this world with so much of each Still, we yearn for a sense of sweet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/30/2015 2:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jean :)
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Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 7/31/2015 7:30:00 AM
Thank you! Btw, I stopped by your wall and loved your work!! : )
Date: 7/30/2015 1:19:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning work Jean! Amazing! Look forward to reading more of ur work!
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Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 7/30/2015 7:02:00 AM
Love your kind words ... THANKS!!
Date: 7/29/2015 3:25:00 PM
Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
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Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 7/29/2015 6:26:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara!! <3
Date: 7/29/2015 2:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jean! ~lee
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Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 7/29/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, Lee! I appreciate it!
Date: 7/16/2015 10:30:00 AM
Being of a conscious form... I enjoyed your poem.Congrat,Growing, intending to teach...
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Jean Omalley Polatnick
Date: 7/16/2015 11:23:00 AM
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed!!

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