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Connoisseur

Note: this poem is in the form of 'bref double' but they don't have it on the list. You are a connoisseur of wine and eyes Are you looking at me, through me, or past me? A living ghost with formidable prowess Or is sight in your head and are you blind? Though your intention is to render a scene Art is in the eye of the beholder of thine The stories that you tell by sitting so serene Form the labyrinth to unravel in your mind. The desert of your hair is swallowed by famished skies They are an inky throbbing throat of greed Each swell of hair a mound of desert gone to seed Wild man you are redeemer to your kind Are you an artist or is art your disguise? The famished skies render you powerless

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Date: 1/2/2015 11:52:00 PM
Casey, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:58:00 PM
Just wanted to say thank you to all for your kind congratulations...was a wonderful surprise to hop on here this morning and discover my placing :)
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:57:00 PM
Just wanted to say thank you to all for your kind congratulations...was a wonderful surprise to hop on here this morning and discover my placing :)
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:59:00 AM
Congrats Casey,it is your year of winning,in poetry and all, have a wonderful 2015...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:27:00 AM
superb imagry and I love the form you used for the poem have never seen it before - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/28/2014 3:36:00 PM
well writen,Casey, a connoisseur or a disgiuse Blessings and a Happy New Year
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Katie-Jayne Boardman
Date: 12/29/2014 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Eve. New Years Blessings to you too.
Date: 12/28/2014 3:26:00 PM
Hi Casey. I like this. I don't know why as it is not my normal sort of poetry but I do. Possibly because I've never read poetry of this sort before. Thank you for writing it and sharing.
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Katie-Jayne Boardman
Date: 12/29/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Micheal. I'm glad to have introduced you to some new poetry:)

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