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Confusion

We stand up We gather our weapons We band together We fight We battle We win We gain power We are commoners over Emperors We are the powerless with power They came They rebelled They fought They conquered They are Royalty to us peasants They command God They are power high Ecstasy running through everyone’s veins The order of things thrown into mayhem Chaos controlling everything Who are the leaders? Who are the followers? Who are the winners? Who are the losers? Who are the royals? Who are the normals? The leaders are followers Followers are leaders The winners are losers Losers are winners The royals are the normals Normals are royals Everyone is everyone.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/20/2014 4:15:00 PM

haha here's the rating...sorry, Christian.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/20/2014 4:13:00 PM

Wonderful questions injected in this write. Awesome imagery and this one earns a 7 and favoriting it. :DD GOOD JOB! The rhythm was pretty cool too! This sort of made sense to me...hardly any confusion here. ~ DWB

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/11/2013 8:00:00 AM

Great message. Always, Laura

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/24/2013 7:33:00 PM

True, it's all a matter of perspective. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/19/2013 2:03:00 PM

Christian, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2013 9:29:00 PM

Christian, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2013 12:25:00 PM

about your poem: I like the confusion we live in day by day. I especially like this line,,, The leaders are followers Followers are leaders The winners are losers Losers are winners..... who are? We are! enjoyed...LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2013 12:23:00 PM

Christian, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA