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Confused about him

Stuck in the middle
trapped and scared.
Does anyone see me?
Am I really there?
Thoughts racing.
Mind unvailing.
Blood rushing.
I'm coming undone.
Why can't I just pick one?
It's him I love,
but he doesn't love me.
His family has problems,
he takes it out on me.
I'm so confused.
Don't know what to do.
Maybe I need more time
to sit and think it through.

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  1. Date: 1/13/2009 8:31:00 AM
    awww tht soooooooo sad and i wouldnt want to be in there shoes and hw sad is tht bt i would kinda knw but i i woulnt take it out on people lol love this its interesting to me anyway

  1. Date: 1/9/2009 3:43:00 PM
    You go girl, lovely poem, deeply expressed, follow your heart..Tyesha

  1. Date: 1/9/2009 1:35:00 PM
    wow great poem girl....Maryam