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She loves me, she loves me not

She tells me I'm all she's got

When I'm near her, It's like she feels resentment I think

The looks she gives me...Damn...Make me not wanna blink

There is no 3, it's just 2 of us: me & you

When it comes to lying and cheating, trust me I'm through

You said All is Forgivin, so why da sad face, boo

Are you having second thoughts on remaining my moo moo

If you are, I understand deeply because it's all my fault

The disappointment in your voice, make me wanna do a suicide pole vault

I want no sympathy from you, just your love and your trust

Making it up to you is a must

I feel like Avant: "Don't take your love away."

I'm not leaving I'm here to stay

These females are now scheming on taking me from you

I'm 200% urs moo moo I swear it's true

You say you believe me but I feel amused

Deep down in my heart I think you're confused

Leave or stay...

Give or take away...

Build or destroy...

Fire me or employ...

You're not my toy...

You're my joy

Believe this paper

We have haters

I'm sorry bay

I have nothing else to say

Copyright © Richard-Jamaal Keen

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  1. Date: 8/5/2009 4:03:00 PM
    thats cute....sounds like a great

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 3:09:00 PM
    Nice rhyne, you said it all, Bill

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 2:58:00 PM
    Good expressions of sentiments, God Bless, Moses

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 2:25:00 PM
    nice way to express yourself. i enjoyed it. always, cherica lynn<3